Reviews For JSA Family
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.19 09:59 pm · On: JSA Family Pieter and Rick
Enjoying the story. Found a couple things: 1) "I'll give you a tour afer breakfast" - I think you wanted "after". 2) The other thing is that the story is cut off at the end "And I'm sure Charles and I can help you *exer"
Reviewer: Starshinedogs (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.15 09:13 pm · On: JSA Family Pieter and Rick
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