Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviews For JSA Family
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.20 04:59 am · On: JSA Family Pieter and Rick

Enjoying the story. Found a couple things: 1) "I'll give you a tour afer breakfast" - I think you wanted "after". 2) The other thing is that the story is cut off at the end "And I'm sure Charles and I can help you *exer"

Author's Response: thank you, I didn't realize it had been cut off when I posted, it's fixed now. And I got that typo too. Josette

Reviewer: Starshinedogs (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.16 04:13 am · On: JSA Family Pieter and Rick

I have sharp pointy stick's and i'm not afraid to use them. Good start cant wait for round 4 and 5 as i want some hot smut

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