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Reviews For A New Start: How Xander got his Freedom

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 11:23 pm · On: Chapter 3

Well written with a good storylne, thanks.

Author's Response: no, no... Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 04:09 pm · On: Chapter 3

Thanks for sharing! This story is great! I absolutely love how evil Xan can be! Sicing Eric's mother on him was a great idea! *cackles* I look forward to reading the next chapter! Wonderful job! Blessed Be. ^__^

Author's Response:
I'm gald you enjoyed it. Besides, Xander needs his evil kicks somehow... *chuckles*
Thanks for the love!

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:58 am · On: Chapter 3

This was wonderful and I am glad to see that you redeemed both Eric and Calleigh. I love the confrontation between Chris and Horatio. The interaction between the team and Xander was wonderful and the sex way yummy.

Thanks
Calia

Author's Response:
*smiles* I'm glad you liked it
The story feels so natural writing like this, and I can see why people like longer fics....
*sighs* it's gonna be perfect....

Reviewer: angelkitty77 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:15 am · On: Chapter 3

oh man this is so awesome.... i look forward to seeing you updates from your jounarl and then coming here and finding it here too and being able to get it all in one shot to read so thanks and cant wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I post in both places to keep both people happy..... not everyone on the list has this archive... so my LJ is the perfect place... since I post fics there all the time too...

Reviewer: kcat13 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:11 am · On: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this story, and was especially happy to see Ezra, Vin & Xander finally get together. I cackled gleefully at Xander laying out a smackdown over how the lab was treating Ryan. (jerks). I'm glad that you had Xander finally sharing more of his past with the team, & the earlier part about Ezra & Vin helping him with PTSD was great.
It would be nice to have some more of that emotional development for Xander (and the others). Perhaps show the days when Xander is enveloped by memories (the depression days), a late night sad phone call with Vin because something reminded him of one Scooby or another. Maybe he visits Speed's grave because he has no place to memoralize his lost 'family,' or finds an artist to draw pictures of everyone since he has none.

Author's Response:
*grins* you're telling the plot bunny secrets....
I'd say shame on you... but that's just mean.
I'm glad you like it, and I will be going into the more "depressing" parts of Xander's life and past.... that and Vin and Ez will be hearing more of it....

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Reviews For A New Start: How Xander got his Freedom Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 11:23 pm · On: Chapter 3 Well written with a good storylne, thanks. Author's Response: no, no... Thank you for the review! Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 04:09 pm · On: Chapter 3 Thanks for sharing! This story is great! I absolutely love how evil Xan can be! Sicing Eric's mother on him was a great idea! cackles I look forward to reading the next chapter! Wonderful job! Blessed Be. ^__^ Author's Response: I'm gald you enjoyed it. Besides, Xander needs his evil kicks somehow... chuckles Thanks for the love! Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:58 am · On: Chapter 3 This was wonderful and I am glad to see that you redeemed both Eric and Calleigh. I love the confrontation between Chris and Horatio. The interaction between the team and Xander was wonderful and the sex way yummy. Thanks Calia Author's Response: smiles I'm glad you liked it The story feels so natural writing like this, and I can see why people like longer fics.... sighs it's gonna be perfect.... Reviewer: angelkitty77 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:15 am · On: Chapter 3 oh man this is so awesome.... i look forward to seeing you updates from your jounarl and then coming here and finding it here too and being able to get it all in one shot to read so thanks and cant wait to read more Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I post in both places to keep both people happy..... not everyone on the list has this archive... so my LJ is the perfect place... since I post fics there all the time too... Reviewer: kcat13 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:11 am · On: Chapter 3 I'm really enjoying this story, and was especially happy to see Ezra, Vin & Xander finally get together. I cackled gleefully at Xander laying out a smackdown over how the lab was treating Ryan. (jerks). I'm glad that you had Xander finally sharing more of his past with the team, & the earlier part about Ezra & Vin helping him with PTSD was great. It would be nice to have some more of that emotional development for Xander (and the others). Perhaps show the days when Xander is enveloped by memories (the depression days), a late night sad phone call with Vin because something reminded him of one Scooby or another. Maybe he visits Speed's grave because he has no place to memoralize his lost 'family,' or finds an artist to draw pictures of everyone since he has none. Author's Response: grins you're telling the plot bunny secrets.... I'd say shame on you... but that's just mean. I'm glad you like it, and I will be going into the more "depressing" parts of Xander's life and past.... that and Vin and Ez will be hearing more of it.... You must login (register) to review.

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