Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviews For New Alliances
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.19 01:18 pm · On: Epilogue

Another well written chapter, thanks.

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.03.25 04:33 am · On: Chapter 10

Yay, an update!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.03.23 07:33 pm · On: Chapter 10

"Adam used her technical expertise to divest Dam..." Typo/character mix-up?

Great chapter, but maybe a little more detail on the assault before Adam.

 



Author's Response:

I've corrected the typo. I wasn't sure how much detail to put into the assault. The epilogue will have some more information about the assault.

 Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.02.12 01:33 am · On: Chapters 1-9

A well written story with lots of characters teasing me for their origins.

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