An interesting take on Harry ending up with the Winchesters.  I like it thus far, especially the inclusion of Hedwig.  Is she flying along with them or riding in the truck with John? 

 I would have liked a bit more content with Harry's visit to Diagon Alley, particularly Gringotts.  It seemed like you were hinting something going on with Harry's accounts or I might have been reading too much into it.  Did his old key disappear with the new ones issued?  Did harry bring his cloak with him or did he hide it and the photo album back under the floorboards?  I assume he has his wand with him.  I wonder if you'll have him reveal the wizarding world and his true history to the winchesters.  I look forward to finding out.

 

Author's Response: Glad you like it. She's just flying around following them. His old keys would no longer work.