Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.19 09:59 pm · On: Chapter 6

Enjoying the story. Found a couple things: 1) "I'll give you a tour afer breakfast" - I think you wanted "after". 2) The other thing is that the story is cut off at the end "And I'm sure Charles and I can help you *exer"

Author's Response: thank you, I didn't realize it had been cut off when I posted, it's fixed now. And I got that typo too. Josette

Reviewer: Starshinedogs (Signed) · Date: 2011.10.15 09:13 pm · On: Chapter 1

I have sharp pointy stick's and i'm not afraid to use them. Good start cant wait for round 4 and 5 as i want some hot smut

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