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Reviews For Warrior Mage
Reviewer: starfall (Signed) · Date: 2015.11.02 02:29 am · On: Chapter 1

Nooooo where's the rest of it?

Reviewer: dbascha (Signed) · Date: 2013.04.22 04:42 pm · On: Chapter 1

Stoping in the middle of a sentence isn't nice or fair. Darn it [pouts] But I do really like this. [my 5th or 6th reading so far]

 

However Angelus did give a clue as to how Xander can defeat him with his statement '...and that potion made me immune to the rest of YOUR magic.' Since Xander had to learn all magic in his realm[?] so he doesn't have to use just his fire mage magic, he could use a modified gypsey curse - without the loophole - or make an entirely new one using a good spell instead of the corrupting curse that probably started Willow's downfall.

 

And using that [and his own] Xander could also discover what's really wrong with the girls. Spells and interfearance if they're victims, or how they got corrupted and twisted in the first place. Or one of each - the corruption of one spelling or causing the corruption of the other [w-b in this case]

 

Keep up the good work and add more soon please. 

 

Reviewer: mendenbar01 (Signed) · Date: 2012.11.10 06:19 pm · On: Chapter 1

Egads. this story stopped in the middle of a sentence!  Is there more? I am really enjoying your Xander/Angel stories and would be extremely pleased to see them completed.  If they ARE finished somewhere, would/could you send me a link?

 

m.ringe@insightbb.com

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2012.05.03 02:55 pm · On: Chapter 1

An intriguing storyline.

Reviewer: nyx (Signed) · Date: 2012.05.01 12:08 pm · On: Chapter 1

Sweet! I'm curious of how Xander is going to do it, I have no doubt that he will win but I don't really think Angel is going to die, so a riddle!

 

Reviewer: TakiKiOni (Signed) · Date: 2012.05.01 07:06 am · On: Chapter 1

I like it, though it seems to flow kinda fast in spots.



Author's Response:

That is why on a few other groups, people told me it sucked because everything was happening to fast.  I have tried to tone it down, but my rythm or timing is off some how.

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