Reviews For Unifnished Bad Xander
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.26 04:48 pm · On: Part 1
Enjoyed this a lot. tfs
Reviewer: EM1 (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.14 11:23 pm · On: Part 1
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.09 01:12 pm · On: Part 1
Ok so you need a new conflict for Xander to deal with which isn't a demon, or you need to return to finish the conflict with CSI. Seems that you end the CSI too quickly and too easily. It was like you want 'see demon? ohhh ok, problem solved'. It just doesn't feel finished.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.09 01:07 pm · On: Part 1
Reviewer: connerjw (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.09 04:05 am · On: Part 1
Reviewer: ladyholder (Signed) · Date: 2017.09.09 02:59 am · On: Part 1
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