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Reviews For Signs and Portents
Reviewer: Fitsofrage (Signed) · Date: 2009.05.04 10:14 pm · On: Dinner and a Show

Hahaha. Somehow, the image of Vaako blushing is one I find exceptionally unbelievable in one hand, and believable in another. More?

Author's Response: I know what you mean about Vaako blushing being unbeleiveable, I very nearly didn't write in the blush. However, given the right situation, nearly everyone blushes. Between the two of them, Riddick is the one least likely to blush and least likely to 'forget' about the others still being in the room. In the end it was too tempting to pass up. <G> MM

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2009.05.03 02:37 am · On: Dinner and a Show

LOL! I love the humor you laced into the hot sex.

 

 

Thanks

Calia



Author's Response: Thank you. <G> MM

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.21 04:50 am · On: Pack Growth

Well now, there's eating and there's eating.  I love that they are being paired in this fic and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

 

Thanks

Calia



Author's Response: <G> Thank you. MM

Reviewer: Faramir (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.19 10:14 pm · On: Pack Growth

*grin*  *smirk* *droooooo

Author's Response: <G> MM

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.18 03:51 am · On: Hellcat bath time

"The airlock is always an option," Vaako replied automatically.

Well, he wasn't torn for long ! :)

There are a couple places in the Hellcat scene where you used "wearily" which implies fatigue.  I think for at least Vaako's reaction, you wanted "warily" which indicates caution.

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.18 01:08 am · On: Hellcat bath time

I love that the hellcat's claimed Xander as their own.  I also love Vaak's automatic response.  I look forward to seeing what happens next.

 

Thanks

Calia

Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.17 03:24 pm · On: Hellcat bath time

*cackles* YAY!!! I love Vaako's last line....

*snickers* it's perfect. *sighs happily*

Reviewer: fallen_legacies (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.17 07:31 am · On: Hellcat bath time

'...I know you won't," Riddick said warningly before finishing off his drink. "Now what do you suggest we do with our current threat?'

"The airlock is always an option," Vaako replied automatically.'

I vote for the airlock!

Reviewer: angelkitty77 (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.17 07:00 am · On: Hellcat bath time

with the last line all i could think of was "IN SPACE NOONE CAN HEAR YOUR TEDDY BEAR SCREAM."

Reviewer: Lianwa (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.17 06:11 am · On: Hellcat bath time

Ah, good old rule #8:  Mockery and derision have their place. Usually, it's on the far side of the airlock.

 of course Riddick is more of a rule # 6 kind of guy.

6. If violence wasn’t your last resort, you failed to resort to enough of it.

Reviewer: Faramir (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.17 05:28 am · On: Hellcat bath time

*grins*  Loved it!  *feeds the bunnies and authors*

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.15 06:36 pm · On: Demons and the Sisterhood

Hallie just grin as she said, "Paybacks a bitch," before vanishing.

Anya looked at the spot her friend had been at. "And I thought I was vicious," she whispered before she too vanished from the ship.

 Oh Damn, Hallie is on a rip and scaring Anya...

 

"We could have one of the remaining Furyans kill the Riddick for us," the earth Elemental suggested. "He would be considered to be a traitor since he's working with the Necromongers."

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Seems like some secrets are going to be popping out and creating problems. I would wager our darling Elemental with the fleet is really going to get it once Riddick finds out... 

 

 

Reviewer: bexmania (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.13 09:58 am · On: Demons and the Sisterhood

Riddick's a daddy? Sweet

Reviewer: Faramir (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.12 05:20 am · On: Demons and the Sisterhood

*slowly smirks*  *feeds the bunnies*  *joins Hallie in cackling at the idiots* *offers goodies to the writers and sits patiently staring for more*

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.11 10:17 pm · On: Chapter 4

This is a great story...like this version a lot as well:)  Keep up the good work:D

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. So many of the others wanted a true child fic that it would be a shame to deny them.

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.10 08:16 am · On: Chapter 3

Awesome, thanks for starting this one. I look forward to what everyone comes up with. ^__^

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