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Reviews For Xander in Miami
Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.31 05:31 am · On: Chapter 8

Good work!! How will Speed react?

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.31 01:11 am · On: Chapter 8

*sighs* Damn talk about sweet and sappy romance...just what the world needs more of <g>...please, please update sooner though. I do know how life can get, so I'll be waiting with bated breath 

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.28 04:46 am · On: Chapter 7

Just reread the whole thing again and still love it.  There are some grammar issues, but nothing too serious.  The only word choices I'm questioning are the ones Xander wouldn't use because they're more from a foreign viewpoint (the last one may be a misspelling instead):

petrol = gas
fortnight = couple weeks
bench = counter
broachers = brochures

When Xander is buying the two houses, especially since both have been on the market for a long time with minimal interest, he should have offered less than asking.  He's worked hard for his money over the years, and he's not of the class of people that spend frivolously.  Since both owners were despairing of getting rid of the properties, and both needed a lot of work for damages, he should have been able to get a further reduction on price - maybe even have them cover all closing costs.

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.28 03:07 am · On: Chapter 7

Another great chapter:)

Reviewer: masterpenguin (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.26 10:28 am · On: Chapter 7

Cool, I do love this story. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: kcat13 (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.26 08:25 am · On: Chapter 7

I'm really enjoying this story.  I like the relationship that has grown between xander & horatio; and what has developed between xander & speed.  Horatio is strong enough to let Xander relax & be himself--it's a really good friendship regardless of the years between first meet & this one. 

love how a contented xander manifests in purring and yips while he sleeps, it's quite adorable. 

I think Xander was the only one who could get through to speed about his weapon.  And Xander so nailed the members of the team and their qualities.  

 I can't wait for a Willow smackdown. what a selfish bitch.  actually the whole crew of them are selfish; Giles finally getting a clue only slightly ameliorates his culpability because it only took him something like 10 years!

Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.25 08:06 am · On: Chapter 7

*purrr* *snuggle* *hug*.  Digs up a bag of dark M&Ms and hands them over. I am really enjoying this story. Thanks.

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.09 04:58 am · On: Chapter 6

Finally had time to catch up with this...enjoyed it immensely:)  Looking forward to whatever comes next.

Reviewer: Xocoatldreams (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.08 07:09 am · On: Chapter 6

oooo, mouth of hell!  Xander's not going to be happy. And bad Willow,  Bad bad!

Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.08 06:54 am · On: Chapter 6

ooh yes an update.  He he. Nice touch with whoosh fire. Snicker, all the gangs vacating because X is in town and he is completely oblivious to it. On man, no one better tell X about Stetler or the Mala Noches.

 I really like this story and am bouncing impatiently for more of course.  Thanks for the story.

Reviewer: cookieofwood87 (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.07 08:00 pm · On: Chapter 6

So far I really like your story, but I am having trouble with a couple of your terms.  what is a ute and are sunnies sunglasses?  and does kindy mean kindergarten?  But other than those terms I really like how the story flows and how your characters voices sound.

Author's Response: Sorry, a ute is a two or four door truck with a tray on the back. Sunnies is sunglasses and Kindy is Kindergarten. It's what we call them here down under in Australia and sometimes forget that not everyone knows the slang.

Reviewer: Wind Wolf (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.07 03:28 am · On: Chapter 6

Really good, thank you.  WW.

Reviewer: Skidgey (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.07 03:10 am · On: Chapter 6

Thank you for the two updates I am loving this story and need a pic-me-up. it was a very welcome one.

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.07 01:01 am · On: Chapter 6

Happy dance!  It's great to see another update so soon. 

“Something about the mouth of hell, it’s a myth told to frighten children back home, Mama used to tell us that if we were bad that demons would take us.” Eric shrugged"-- I know Horatio knows some of Xander's past, I wonder if he understood just how respected/feared he really is in that world?

I did notice one wrong word usage.  When Xander is looking over the real estate you twice referred to "broachers".  I think you wanted "brochures".  Also, there was one word used in this chapter and an earlier one that is 'brit-speak' -- in the US, kitchens have a 'counter' or 'countertop', not a 'bench'. 

Reviewer: TakiKiOni (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 04:07 pm · On: Chapter 6

.... That's it? *whimpers* I love it, and you leave it there? Please update soon!!! *begs & holds out plate of cookies*

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 04:04 pm · On: Chapter 6

*smiles and shakes head* Oh damn, looks like a lot of things are popping out of the proverbial closet and in more than one way. H, being shy, Willow screwing up like that and Xander's temper going a few degrees beyond red hot...my oh my what is coming next? Whatever it is, I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: ferball (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 03:55 pm · On: Chapter 6

Great story - more soon please! Small nit - I think broachers should be brochures?  Not sure of the spelling myself, could use flyers?

 

jen



Author's Response: I knew that it was wrong but damn spell check insisted that it was right. I was actually looking for Flyers but couldn't remember the name so thanks!

Reviewer: plutofigaro (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 12:49 pm · On: Chapter 6

LOL, Xander comes to town and send the so call big bads running for cover.  Nice.  What will H think will he finds out it's Xander? 

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 12:11 pm · On: Chapter 6

Poor Xander, glad H went after him. Glad Willow will be made to see that actions have consequences. A Hellmouth in Miami? Hope H mentions that conversation to Xander!!! Good work!!!

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 08:16 am · On: Chapter 5

Good work!! Glad Xander and Speed are getting along

Reviewer: ReflectionsOTR (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.06 02:12 am · On: Chapter 5

Muse wanted to see Miami in person? Or did a tour at Disney World Resort? Or did it decide to visit somewhere else?

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.30 11:20 pm · On: Chapter 4

Oh damn, sweet and building up to something interesting it feels like. I'm definitely enjoying how the fics going. More please.

Reviewer: kim_cc (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.30 06:19 am · On: Chapter 4

I love how Xander is slowly integrating into Miami and him talking w/Speed -- thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.30 04:05 am · On: Chapter 4

Speed is pretty discerning about Xander's masks too it looks like.  It's nice to see them feeling out how to interact with each other since both of them are important to H.  Looking forward to more. 

I'm assuming H told Eric & Calleigh to hold off on crowding Xander since neither has stopped by to interrogate him yet (or did they get Alexx's take on him and back off while Xander's winding down?).

Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.29 08:58 pm · On: Chapter 4

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

Loves it!!!! I hope you keep up the good work!!!

*glomps* you rock!

Reviewer: Starshinedogs (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.29 07:56 pm · On: Chapter 4

*hugs* i love this chapter. i would not want to be the chief of police or the officers that failed to respond to H's call *shudder*. and once speed is back to his normal snarky self i can see him and xander starting a prank war on stetler. more soon k

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.29 04:13 pm · On: Chapter 4

Like his meeting with Speed. Was that off scene in an episode? What has Xander so wired? Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.24 04:14 pm · On: Chapter 3

Thanks for telling me it was here! Great work! SO you had Speed survive the jewllrey shop, yay!! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.23 12:48 am · On: Chapter 3

Well written, with nicely thought out details.

Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.22 08:12 am · On: Chapter 3

*purrr*  Good addition.  I can see you working towards linking up with your other snippet. I would guess Speed gets to liking X. He and H share X for a while until a real trio forms.  *mmmmm*

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