Reviews For Apprentice
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 06:20 am · On: Chapter 5
Much more enjoyable than canon, but did Neville ever get his parents back to functioning?
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 03:43 am · On: Chapter 2
Great version of first year, well done.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 01:13 am · On: Chapter 1
This is a cracking good story and I'm sorry that I missed it for so long. Well done & thanks.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 01:12 am · On: Chapter 1
This is a cracking good story and I'm sorry that I missed it for so long. Well done & thanks.
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.08.28 03:58 am · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.01 03:39 am · On: Chapter 5
Reviewer: hollywoude (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.17 06:37 pm · On: Chapter 2
Love it! Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.16 11:43 pm · On: Chapter 2
Over all I definitely have enjoyed this unique twist on things. Especially with Harry ending up in somewhere other than Gryffindor or Slytherin. Few small errors that I spotted here and there are easily corrected and are mostly spelling related, such as Tai Chi, not Ti Chi.
Reviewer: kcgx23 (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.16 11:35 pm · On: Chapter 2
Great story so far, I can't wait to read more, I like this Harry, and also Neville, they should come out to play more often. |
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