Reviewer: MM_Contrary (Signed) · Date: 2020.11.05 11:47 pm · On: A Starting of Control

You know, I still like this story a lot.  I can hardly believe it's been so long since you wrote this.  I was rereading the story and realized the whole 'almost got the particle accelerator to work' portion and the build up of tracking the problems/migrations would be a great lead into a MCU crossover.  Xander starts building things with Andrew and Jonathan and afternoon the Judge incident they realize they need larger stopping options for the apocalyptic issues.  The particle accelerator gets finished among other things.  Maybe handling the Judge gets SHIELD's attention enough to have a watcher sent, but when SHIELD keeps losing investigators Coulson gets sent just in time for graduation.  It would be like DCIS and the Twin CSI crossed with MCU and maybe even President Xander...if you have the boys selling remade warding kits and using their tracking to find and raid various caches to fund their equipment purchases it's like Xander Dumas and Comic Shop Xander crossed over too. 

Author's Response: Thanks, dear. I liked this story too and thats a great idea. i'm going to put it into my idea file. You've given me a lot of really good ideas over the years.

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2010.11.25 06:06 pm · On: A Starting of Control

Really enjoyed this:)  Don't know how I missed it when you first posted...hope to see more of it:D

Author's Response: If the muse ever comes back, but it was put up here because of teh way the muse quit. but i'm glad you liked it. happy reading and holidays. vo

Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.07 11:48 pm · On: A Starting of Control

Hmmm. Very angry feeling to this one. Why the confrontation with the Mayor? Nice use of Andrew and Jonathon. Good work. Thanks.

Author's Response: not so much angry as just tired of no one doing anything that seems to be making a difference. they hunt and the next day, six more rise. it's the knowledge that it's a neverending war. why the confrontation? the mayor was wanting the house for the same reason, the failed ritual that killed his parents. if he hadn't gotten him off his back, the old man might start to suspect something. we know by cannon he knew that buffy had helpers then. the mayor was trying to take them out on her to get her to be weaker so he'd have a more open playing field. but thank you and yeah, it proves that the geek kings can do some good if they're pointed in the right direction instead of at warren's command. you're welcome. vo

Reviewer: fallen_legacies (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.06 07:26 pm · On: A Starting of Control

I really like how this is going! Cant wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: thank you. i hope the next chapter comes soon. i'm looking forward to how the muses do graduation with the new cell. i'm glad you liked it. happy reading. vo

Reviewer: Delphina (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.04 03:48 pm · On: A Starting of Control

*offers incense, chocolate and other goods at the altar to ms vos muses*  be nice to the lady, we appriciate her works of xander

Author's Response: thank you for the offerings. i'm glad you liked them, Delphina. You guys are almost always very nice to me. happy reading. vo

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.03 11:24 pm · On: A Starting of Control

Great new story, thanks.

Author's Response: you're welcome. vo