Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.27 08:08 pm · On: Chapter 39
*insane cackling* Oh damn... well Rodney's going to be having some fun *giggles*
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.27 03:38 am · On: Chapter 39
*snickers* poor Nathan.. dealing with Mckay.. though he is the same way. *smirks* His Jack will have a hard time keeping him calm..
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.27 02:38 am · On: Chapter 39
I can't remember who McKay is related to or didn't you tell us? You know you really need to write us up a chart of who's related to whom and what series they're from sicne I'm getting lost... of course that could be from the late of sleep, caffeine and sanity
Author's Response: McKay showed up on Professor Snape's lineage tapestry, they're brothers. Now whether it turns out that Rodney is adopted or Severus is, I'm not sure. Josette
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.27 12:17 am · On: Chapter 38
A great twist!
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.27 12:13 am · On: Chapter 37
Bad flashbacks to school. Great writing.
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.26 09:36 pm · On: Chapter 38
*snickers* Oh man.. I love this chapter. Mckay as an Unspeakable.. *shakes head* *loves the stunned look on John' face too* Your going to catch flies Sheppard.
Reviewer: voracity (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.26 08:53 pm · On: Chapter 38
hmm, are we going to 'ship them?
Author's Response: Sheppard and McKay? Maybe, if Sheppard pissed McKay off enough with his babbling and gibbering about suddenly finding out he's got a nephew and that McKay's a wizard, McKay might just kiss him to shut him up while O'Neill cackles. Josette
Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.26 08:49 pm · On: Chapter 38
Oh bloody hell...*whimpers and groans*
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.26 08:45 pm · On: Chapter 38
You wrote 'by day pretending to be a champion of the light but by using his position to molest young' I think you meant 'by day pretending to be a champion of the light but by night using his position to molest young'
Author's Response: thanks, I'll fix that, I had originally wrote that then changed it when I thought 'why only at night?' Josette
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.26 08:35 pm · On: Chapter 37
When Harry mention how Ron and the others would be middle of their first class while he waits at home before going to school is wrong Eureka is in Oregon and therefore about 9 hrs behind Hogwarts
Author's Response: Ahh but I said if his math is right they'd be in the middle of their first class. Harry isn't quite sure what the time difference is, he's used to traveling by House Elf Magic and portkey and it only seemed a couple hours earlier when he traveled the first time to Eureka and then for Christmas. But thanks I wasn't quite sure what the time difference was. Josette
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.20 02:17 am · On: Chapter 36
A great explanation from Dean as well as a surprise about Snape and his handling of his House. Well done.
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.20 01:20 am · On: Chapter 36
Don't expel Draco.. it's more fun to watch what his hous will do to him plus watch his reaction as the world change around him.
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.19 10:41 pm · On: Chapter 36
Ooh this was a great chapter. Liking how Draco is finally getting what is coming to him. Ron could have done a lot better in school if he had paid attention. One little mistake here. I think you meant Neville instead of Harry in this sentance. Harry and the others sit down.
Author's Response: Sighs and does a face palm you idiot move. I had problems posting this chapter earlier and gave up, while I was doing that I did some editing and noticed that I had Neville sitting down twice, then an UMM, Harry's not there anymore moment. So I deleted that sentence and got back online to try to post this chapter again. AND I POSTED THE WRONG COPY!!! So that has been fixed, thank you and Dennis for noticing that. Josette
Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2010.09.19 10:04 pm · On: Chapter 36
Got a question, possible typo for you. “Indeed Mr. Thomas, good answer. Ten points to Gryffindor.” the teacher says, nodding slightly.
Harry and the others sit down. I thought Harry had left Hogwarts?
Author's Response: Sighs and nods. I went back and edited the chapter after I found that goof and posted the wrong copy to the list because I was in too big a hurry to actually read what I had just posted, I'd been having trouble putting this chapter up and I just wanted it done. It's fixed now.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.27 01:33 pm · On: Chapter 35
A totally justifiable suspicion and yet so wrong. Well done.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.27 01:29 pm · On: Chapter 34
Funny but sad, thanks.
Reviewer: voracity (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.27 03:07 am · On: Chapter 35
ooh, does molly know about hermione? i can't remember. there's going to be some explosions even if she did but i'm not sure which has the worse temper, ron or molly. because that meant hermione cheated on him. oops! vo
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.27 01:57 am · On: Chapter 35
poor Ron just learn his gf was cheating on him... but wasn't he dating someone else in the book or is this just your version?
Author's Response: I've never read the books so it is possible, almost every fanfic I've read have had them dating or sniping at each other in the fifth year so that's what I'm going with here. Except for Viktor, Hermione didn't really date anybody else did she? Josette
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.27 01:09 am · On: Chapter 34
Molly upset over the lose of money? Sorry not the biggest fan of Molly So is anyone going to sue over false advertisement of Hogwarts?
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.26 11:52 pm · On: Chapter 34
Oooh good thing Harry didn't know.. he would be furious. Though i got the feeling that Ginny helped in that with the Headmaster. She wants wealth now. Not caring really how she gets it.
Reviewer: voracity (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.26 11:20 pm · On: Chapter 34
hmm, what else was found in the office? this is getting really interesting. vo
Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.26 09:58 pm · On: Chapter 34
*snicker, snort, giggle* Oh yeah, I think there's even more troubles ahead for some people who can't be bothered to use what brains, little as they are, that they have.
Reviewer: ztivokreb (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.26 09:26 am · On: Chapter 33
I was hoping for some new chapters! I really do love this story.
Reviewer: bulldogmo (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.26 05:28 am · On: Chapter 33
great, I love this story, I have never giggled like I was shrooms before, but Malfoy and Ron just do it for me.....
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.25 02:30 pm · On: Chapter 33
A great illustration of Ron's attitude towards the world outside Ron.
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.25 04:20 am · On: Chapter 33
You think that Dumjblejerk enspelled Ron to get close to Harry and that might effect Ron's ability to learn... so he's not really lazy but embarassed becasue he doesn't understand something or can't read something. I dislike how everyone seems to bash Ron, calling him lazy or stupid
Author's Response: I don't see him as lazy or stupid, but I DO see him as a typical teenage boy who can't see how these classes are going to help him so he keeps shoving everything off until the last second and his grades show it. He wants to play Quidditch the rest of his life and like some athletes, can't think it won't happen and he won't have anything to fall back on when the bubble bursts. Now he might have something akin to a learning disability, but the teachers at Hogwarts just aren't equipped to recognize it or help him find ways to handle it. Now one of the other teachers might ask him some questions and go to the other teachers if they DO think he's got a learning disability but I don't see how learning one way or the other would matter any. Josette
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.25 12:17 am · On: Chapter 32
Wonder if other students will be shipped off to America to restart their education.
Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.25 12:10 am · On: Chapter 31
The Slytherins are dead meat. WOn't be surpirse if Dumbledore was one
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.24 11:48 pm · On: Chapter 32
Big difference in teaching methods, both now and then as well as here and there. Great update, thanks.
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.24 07:55 pm · On: Chapter 31
Ooh more please? pretty please? Ooh I am so looking forward to Draco getting punished for what he did to the others. Seeing Snape act like an actual teacher is going to be good. *sends her goodies and bunny food*
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