Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2012.05.04 11:34 pm · On: Chapter 4

ok.  You need to feed/poke/coddle this bunny for more chapters. I like strong Xanders.

Reviewer: nyx (Signed) · Date: 2012.05.02 02:57 am · On: Chapter 4

This is great! Of course Dean would be behind the plan on the factor alone to give the finger to both sides.

Clay as John twin is a nice twist.

I'm only sad that O'neill and his group are not here. Maybe they can show up later? Specially with his penchant to blow things up like Xander?

Reviewer: Ziva (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.08 07:43 pm · On: Prologue

I love this story, but should't Dean and Sam call Clay 'Uncle Frank' instead of 'Uncle Clay', and why do they have differnt last names if they're twins? Please write more soon.



Author's Response:

For the Uncle Clay, since everyone calls him Clay, they just call him Uncle Clay, as for the last name he changed it when he went into ops because of security reasons so he couldn't be tracked back to his original family.  Pooch takes a big chance by being married with a kid, that is why most when they get married and have kids get out of the game.

Reviewer: MadylanCross (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 09:12 pm · On: Prologue

I love this story and would would love to read the uncensored version if you feel comfortable enough to share. I was off line for over a month or else I would have spoken up for it. Censoring fanfiction is wrong at no point are you claiming world truths, it's a work of fiction for crying out loud. And GDit you are a hell of a good writer.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I plan on completing the darker version, after I get the light side version done.......... this way I can see where I can add the twist I need so as to make the dark side not repeat itself.....

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 04:09 pm · On: Chapter 4

A well explained situation.



Author's Response:

Thank you, and what makes it more fun, some of the stuff is in fact stuff off the discovery channel :-)

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 10:20 am · On: Chapter 4

I really loved this chapter.  I like seeing how the team are protective, but play among themselves.  I have no problem with Jensen being pimped out for info on how to save the kids.  I am sorry that I was one of the ones that was negative about the original chapter, but i still say it was well written.  I look forward to seeing how this group works together.

 

Also will Dean and Castiel get together in this one?

 

Thanks

Calia



Author's Response:

Thank you........... I admit that first one was a bit darker, but also a bit incomplete..................

Reviewer: DemonChyld (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 05:39 am · On: Chapter 4

I think the story is great so far and while i freely admit that i am more comfortable with this version i do hope that someday you will post the uncensored version as well. The changes you have made are actually very subtle and masterfully done. I especially like the comment Clay was thinking about John! That definately got my attention especially as Clay is the younger of the two! Really great job and again I wouldn't mind reading the uncensored version if you ever decide to post it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, from the negative feed I got, I had a hard time conentrating on writing the old version.  It's hard writing something people outright say they would hate to see posted.  But I will do this one, and then go back and do the dark, earthier one that I first planned.

 

bulldogmo

Reviewer: fallen_legacies (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 12:37 am · On: Chapter 4

*cackles* can't wait to see what the bad guy idiots try to so. lol!

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.06 12:28 am · On: Chapter 4

I like!!!! Just one thing.....you called Sam blonde? Why? Cause he's not in the show.

Author's Response:

will change, thought Vo called him blond one time, and kinda stuck that he was a dark blond

Reviewer: Lisagrace (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.05 09:13 am · On: Chapter 3

Love this so far.  Would like to see where you take this.  Please continue. 

Lisa

 

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.04 05:50 am · On: Chapter 3

*grins* More please... pretty please.

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 09:00 am · On: Chapter 3

So is Clay related to the brothers? How will they react to someone who looks like their Dad? Good update!! Glad Cas is helping as much as hecan

Author's Response:

still working on that.... haven't made up my mind

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 06:21 am · On: Chapter 3

Excelent story so far bulldogmo! I can honestly say I have never read a story with this kind of plot before. Look forward to reading more! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I hope my twist later will make it better........

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 05:30 am · On: Chapter 3

Awesome to see Sam and Dean there to help Xander.  I loo forward to seeing how the groups all interact and get along.

 

Thanks

calia

Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 01:33 am · On: Chapter 3

giggle Love the last line

Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 12:51 am · On: Chapter 1

I'm guess a x-over with either the A-Team or the Losers. I'm leaning towards the Losers

Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.03 12:41 am · On: Prologue

SO that means the police, soldiers and even doctors who are harvesting organs from brain dead people are goign to hell. And we can't forget anyone who defended themselves or thier children from harm.

Hell must be very full

Author's Response:

Well, the law written in stone does not give any wiggle room, you kill, your wrong, if it is in the name of God, even the templars are caught under this law.

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 07:39 pm · On: Chapter 2

still interesting, and YAY! Losers!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 04:36 pm · On: Chapter 2

A well done introduction to the Losers.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 03:37 pm · On: Chapter 1

A great idea with an interesting take on how an objective outsider views Xander's mental capabilities.



Author's Response:

ya, I thought Xander needed to see how those out side of the his group saw his abilities...... will help later.....

Reviewer: ztivokreb (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 01:40 pm · On: Chapter 2

another good chapter :-) Can't wait to see the reaction of all the Losers.

I've transferred the story into Word so I can do my thing. I'll get it back to you tonight.

Reviewer: ladyholder (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 09:45 am · On: Chapter 2

Still need a Beta? I have the time & I like the story...

 

~L

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 07:18 am · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter!!!! So this is before the Losers movie obviously. I like.

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 07:17 am · On: Chapter 2

Oooo... This is an awesome read.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  I think the Losers and Xander will get along very well.

 

Thanks

calia

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 06:18 am · On: Chapter 1

Hmmmm very interesting start. More please.

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.02 01:14 am · On: Chapter 1

Hmmm.....sounds like Riley might be calling on the Losers? Power tochallenge all them? Wow.

Author's Response:

Yes with the Losers, as for the power, stay tuned in how it will turn out..... bat fans

Reviewer: ztivokreb (Signed) · Date: 2011.12.01 10:59 pm · On: Chapter 1

I am definitely liking the story so far. Competent!xander is always good to read.

also, if you need a beta, I'm available.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and if you want to beta, take what I have posted and go for it............ I needs work, but I can't fo mine own......

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