Not just confusion to your enemies. Great writing as ever, well done.

Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad you liked it that much.

Great final scenes at the fight and an interesting set of revivals.

Well done and thank you.

Author's Response: thank you and i'm glad you liked it so much.

OK I can see why you're stuck. You can't pull any other Xander from any other universe because the demons killed all the others... or at least I think you wrote that. But you can pull Xander in for dreams.

For the next section, I think you can stop destroying the next seal and deal with something with Dawn and then move to the next seal. Maybe someone wants her or wants to destroy her. Or maybe Clint wakes up and there is a girl in his bed with him.

When in doubt throw in Loki. Loki makes everything better. I can see him sitting around the tower making comments while he waits for them to finish up with this demon so they can try to foil his latest plan. Kind of like 'I'm not touching you' thing

You still have to deal with the President who will be changing into a big ass demon... when?

Does this universe have their own version of Faith and the others who are sleeping? Maybe do something with them

Author's Response: thanks. i needed those. dawn? not sure if she'll get girl form again but maybe someone coming for her. to gel the team together. loki's still in jail but thor was thinking he might have to seek his help with the magic stuff. so maybe but i think stark would have a fit about him in the malibu lab. president wilkins got arrested by the secret service and if he manages his change it will be in a deserted area so they can handle it but see what really happens. no, no faith or the others. they're all either dead or not born there. but thank you a bunch for the ideas. it might undo the stuckness. vo

I love that you had Tara end up in this universe helping everyone and giving most of them headaches.  I'm sorry that you are stuck and I hope that your muse cooperates for the rest of your stories.

 

Thanks

Calia

Author's Response: there's a few i'd like them to cooperate for. but thanks and i'm glad you liked it. vo

It's good to see that they are getting a little help to stop the demonic fog.  I hope that they can save everyone.

 

Thanks

Calia

Author's Response: i'm hoping that they will too. i have no idea yet but i'm pretty sure if they put phil back into stasis, he's going to be really pissed off.

This is an excellent story.  It needs to be grown up into a big story so that we can waste lots of time enjoying it.  :)  One question, will the manage to figure out how to pry Xander and the sleeping slayers out of the other realm at some point?

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it. i'm still working on it but it's going a bit slowly. though, i don't think xander or any of the other slayers will be able to cross over. not sure but i'm pretty sure they won't be able to. but i'm glad you liked it so much.

I can see why you're stuck. You have a great intro to the back story and characters but no conflict. You don't even have the usual default conflict aka demons and vampires

So what if the Council who is Fury's bosses decide to interfere? What if some leaked something to the press?

Author's Response: there's conflict coming when they're getting the seals they need to break down. there's some inter-character conflict but i haven't gotten into that yet. i'll post the rest that i have done up sometime soon. but thanks for the idea. maybe it'll be the cure. vo

Uhm... Can I hope that you finish this? Because I like it. Dark and twisted and all

~L

Author's Response: it's trying to get finished. i have a bit more than this done but not much.