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Reviews For A New Start: How Xander got his Freedom

Reviewer: kitty1213 (Signed) · Date: 2016.06.01 10:15 pm · On: Chapter 6

Loved the story but an abrupt ending. Alot left unsaid. Sequel?? Please.

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2009.04.25 09:34 am · On: Chapter 5

Go Xander!!!! More soon please!!!!

Author's Response: Soon.. the bunny is getting it's final stretch out... but I have to try and work it between work and other engagments....

Reviewer: Starshinedogs (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.30 06:13 am · On: Chapter 5

all right where's the next chapters this is to good. more please

Author's Response: *chuckles* the bunny is slowly coming back to life. I was sick and went to visit family so the bunny was pushed to the side for a moment. But thank you for the nudge and I should have more up soon. I'll be home in a few days and then I'll be able to update what I have written.

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.16 04:49 am · On: Chapter 5

*SQUEAL* I love Xander's version of matchmaking and the Halloween crossdressing was brilliant. I was thrilled to see that the boys could support each others so well. I am so sorry to see that Xander suffered nightmares and that Ezra had to do the case he did.

Thanks
Calia

Author's Response:
*smiles* thanks! Since it's a fact that not all cases are nice, I decided, and the bunny insisted, that one of Ezra's cases be bad.
*sighs* the only thing I had issues with was the addition of Highlander... since I don't know if I'll be adding anymore than just Methos to the fic.... If he meets Duncan... how would they meet? and all that.... *pouts* I hate pushy bunnies....

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.15 08:55 am · On: Chapter 5

*cackling and ROFL* Thanks Katrina this week has sucked and I really needed the laughs!! I love Xander crossdressing and tricking people! I do wonder what would happen if he did it to Mac, Don, and Danny? *cackles* I can't wait to see what happens with Stetler! I really do love this story and look forward to the next chapter. Great job and Blessed Be. ^__^

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm sorry your week sucked, but am glad that this brought you much joy.

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.12 08:24 am · On: Chapter 4

*cackles* Gibbs baiting is so much fun! I adore Xander! I am glad everyone got their just desserts at the end, especially Buffy and Willow. I do wonder what happened to Oz? Thanks for another awesome chapter! ^__^ I look forward to reading more. Blessed Be.

Author's Response:
OZ was still on Holy ground at that point..... so yeah... he was getting his rewards
Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.12 06:01 am · On: Chapter 4

LOL! I loved this chapter and seeing Gibbs being baited was fun. I loved seeing the group face judgement and I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Thanks
Calia

Author's Response:
*preens* thanks Calia! *dances*
Gibbs baiting was fun to write.... I had to stop several times in the rememberance scene because I was about to cry....
*cuddles my muses* they wanted much sadness.....

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.12 05:27 am · On: Chapter 4

Thank you for another great chapter.
I am really enjoying the characters as you have portrayed them, well done.

Author's Response: *bows* thank you! I really need to thank you guys.... the simple love that everyone is giving me makes it all worth while!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 11:23 pm · On: Chapter 3

Well written with a good storylne, thanks.

Author's Response: no, no... Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 04:09 pm · On: Chapter 3

Thanks for sharing! This story is great! I absolutely love how evil Xan can be! Sicing Eric's mother on him was a great idea! *cackles* I look forward to reading the next chapter! Wonderful job! Blessed Be. ^__^

Author's Response:
I'm gald you enjoyed it. Besides, Xander needs his evil kicks somehow... *chuckles*
Thanks for the love!

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:58 am · On: Chapter 3

This was wonderful and I am glad to see that you redeemed both Eric and Calleigh. I love the confrontation between Chris and Horatio. The interaction between the team and Xander was wonderful and the sex way yummy.

Thanks
Calia

Author's Response:
*smiles* I'm glad you liked it
The story feels so natural writing like this, and I can see why people like longer fics....
*sighs* it's gonna be perfect....

Reviewer: angelkitty77 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:15 am · On: Chapter 3

oh man this is so awesome.... i look forward to seeing you updates from your jounarl and then coming here and finding it here too and being able to get it all in one shot to read so thanks and cant wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I post in both places to keep both people happy..... not everyone on the list has this archive... so my LJ is the perfect place... since I post fics there all the time too...

Reviewer: kcat13 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.10 08:11 am · On: Chapter 3

I'm really enjoying this story, and was especially happy to see Ezra, Vin & Xander finally get together. I cackled gleefully at Xander laying out a smackdown over how the lab was treating Ryan. (jerks). I'm glad that you had Xander finally sharing more of his past with the team, & the earlier part about Ezra & Vin helping him with PTSD was great.
It would be nice to have some more of that emotional development for Xander (and the others). Perhaps show the days when Xander is enveloped by memories (the depression days), a late night sad phone call with Vin because something reminded him of one Scooby or another. Maybe he visits Speed's grave because he has no place to memoralize his lost 'family,' or finds an artist to draw pictures of everyone since he has none.

Author's Response:
*grins* you're telling the plot bunny secrets....
I'd say shame on you... but that's just mean.
I'm glad you like it, and I will be going into the more "depressing" parts of Xander's life and past.... that and Vin and Ez will be hearing more of it....

Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.08 09:23 am · On: Chapter 2

Doing good. Nice intervention with Ryan.

Author's Response: *preens* thank you!

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 05:40 pm · On: Chapter 2

Very nicely written, thanks.

Author's Response: *bows* thank you for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 05:18 am · On: Chapter 2

This is so coool! I love seeing Xander call Calleigh and Eric on their attitudes. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Thanks
Calia

Author's Response: soon.... *smiles* soon you'll see what I'll be cackling about for a week.... *smirks and cackles*

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 05:18 am · On: Chapter 2

Nice job so far; I look forward to the rest

Author's Response: *smiles* thank you! One week for the next chapter

Reviewer: Wind Wolf (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 03:59 am · On: Chapter 2

More yummies. Thank you, WW.

Author's Response: Glad you liked!

Reviewer: GaiaGurl (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 03:30 am · On: Chapter 2

looks really good so far. i can't wait for the next piece to go up.

Author's Response: *preens* one week.... that or my LJ... but one week

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 03:03 am · On: Chapter 2

*ROFL* Go Xander Go! Another awesome chapter and amazing story. I'm glad Xander is helping Ryan. Eric and Calleigh better look out when team 7 arrives. ^__^ I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing. Blessed Be.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. More should be out in a week. take care!

Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.07 01:14 am · On: Chapter 2

More soon pretty please? *begs* I know i comment on your lj too. *grins*

Author's Response:
*Cackles* one week before chapter 3 comes on up.....
*smirks* I can feel the love....

Reviewer: CaliaDragon (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.04 11:24 pm · On: Chapter 1

I love the beginning of this and cannot wait to see what happens through the rest of the fic.
Thanks
Calia

Author's Response: *preens* I'm glad you liked it so far! more should be up by friday..... if the bunny cooperates....

Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.04 02:21 am · On: Chapter 1

Enjoyed this a lot:) Really looking forward to seeing how the relationships/friendships develop in this story.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I hope to update by the end of the week.

Reviewer: Myiaka (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.04 01:14 am · On: Chapter 1

Great Start. Loved how Xander felt betrayed by Willow and how he fit in with Ez.

Author's Response: glad you liked! Thnaks for the review!

Reviewer: plutofigaro (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.03 07:32 pm · On: Chapter 1

hi,
Great start. I love how Xander fits in with the rest. Will they have any spn problems at all?

Author's Response:
Thank you!
It's a demon and magic free world. So, no, there will be nothing supernatural that will affect the team...

Reviewer: Xocoatldreams (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.03 04:07 am · On: Chapter 1

Very cool start! Can't wait for the next installment. And glad to see someone's doing better on NaNo than me!

Author's Response:
*smiles* glad you enjoyed it! My bunny was hyper and wanted to go-go-go!

Good luck with NaNo!

Reviewer: mysta81 (Signed) · Date: 2008.11.03 03:53 am · On: Chapter 1

Great story so far. It's well written and a unique start to other stories I have read. ^_^ The part where they diguised themselves as females was great! *ROFL* Thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more. Blessed Be.

Author's Response:
*blushes* thank you!
The crossdressing was fun to write... I had to hunt down the info if there was double sided tape for skin and was so happy that there was!
More will come when the bunny is willing... take care and thank you once more!

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