Imagine: The List
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Reviews For Apprentice
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2010.08.07 02:09 am · On: Chapter 5

Great story, thanks.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 06:20 am · On: Chapter 5

Much more enjoyable than canon, but did Neville ever get his parents back to functioning?

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 05:43 am · On: Chapter 4

Another well written chapter.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 04:40 am · On: Chapter 3

Great update, thanks.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 03:43 am · On: Chapter 2

Great version of first year, well done.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 01:13 am · On: Chapter 1

This is a cracking good story and I'm sorry that I missed it for so long. Well done & thanks.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.01 01:12 am · On: Chapter 1

This is a cracking good story and I'm sorry that I missed it for so long. Well done & thanks.

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.08.28 03:58 am · On: Chapter 1

Good update, always nice to see Dumbledore stymied. 

Couple things I noticed off hand - a couple times Harry had to 'psyche' someone out - not 'syke'.  Also, the beginning of chapter 6 through to "Hogwarts had been very angry with the demons crawling around her corridors" repeats from Chapter 5.

Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.01 03:39 am · On: Chapter 5

I wonder just what Hogwarts did to the dementors?!  This story is going very well, and I look forward to more.

Reviewer: hollywoude (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.17 06:37 pm · On: Chapter 2

Love it! Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.16 11:43 pm · On: Chapter 2

Over all I definitely have enjoyed this unique twist on things. Especially with Harry ending up in somewhere other than Gryffindor or Slytherin. Few small errors that I spotted here and there are easily corrected and are mostly spelling related, such as Tai Chi, not Ti Chi.

Reviewer: kcgx23 (Signed) · Date: 2009.06.16 11:35 pm · On: Chapter 2

Great story so far, I can't wait to read more, I like this Harry, and also Neville, they should come out to play more often.

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