Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviewer: Charmille (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.29 02:50 am · On: part 2

Okay am confused where did dawn go, she suddenly became a niece and all her gear arrived to a detective ????? Is she close by so xander can see her.

As for the house moving could they not be given magical doors that allowed them to where xander is, I mean you could do it as a key when place in a lock turns it into a door to the house. Could see that causing giggles when they are seen going in but the room turns out to be empty. Jack could blame it on Thor when he uses the door to escape the paper work.

Do love the idea of Loki being in the mix can see the shudders that would happen each time he visited.

Smiles all round with this look forward to the next chapter



Author's Response: Dawn got sorted by Halfrek to a new family for the danger she was in when she couldn't be xander's mother. looking at her for that meant that halfrek found she was in greater danger and would help cause greater danger. so she got a 'wish granted' treatment too. as for the house, it'll be a switching house. when it's time for him to go to colorado it'll appear there. they'll wake up one morning and just be there. thanks for the idea and hopefully you like the next chapter just as much. vo

Reviewer: kirallie (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.16 03:30 am · On: part 2

Interesting

Author's Response: thank you. vo

Reviewer: Lady FoxFire (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.16 02:28 am · On: part 2

The Loser met their ultimate enemy and it's a baby named Xander. He won, they lost. Now he's in Hawaii. What chance does the 50th state have against this terror.

Good timing on this fic, My son was have male-PMS, so I needed something to save his life. Almost as good as chocolate but not quite

Author's Response: the 50th state has a bit of a chance. danny and steve are both trying to save it. and i'm sorry about your son's male-PMS. female PMS is bad enough, teenage boy PMS is horrendous. maybe sometime soon i'll have something else to subtly cure that. princesses.

Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.15 07:29 pm · On: part 2

Cracking good fun with Xander driving everyone mental.



Author's Response: thank you. they're about to form a support group.

Reviewer: Faramir (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.15 07:14 pm · On: part 2

*shakes head* Poor, delusional Rachel :P *feeds The Force and attempts to pounce the Xander for a cuddle*

Author's Response: she'll learn and she'll get to nag his caregiver too because the nanny does mean things like try to put xander in a daycare.

Reviewer: ladyholder (Signed) · Date: 2012.04.15 02:29 pm · On: part 2

Oh. YES!

I havee been checking and checking the site to see if there was more of this and there is! Wonderful.

I am liking how the three guys are taking reality into some consideration and trying to make it so they can do their jobs and still be there for Xander. Well done. Is Xander going to let those memories of his fade? Or will the chaos that surrounds him allow him to keep them?

Alsois Jack going to be doing anything about the 'shitbag' General? Like maybe get the Loosers assigned to the SGC?

Anyway you slice it, this is wonderful and I am looking forward to more.

Thank you!

~L



Author's Response: no, the memories won't be fading probably. as for the losers, once they're free of sunnydale, yeah, they might be going SGC. not sure yet.

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