Reviews For Miami GHS
Reviewer: storylistener (Signed) · Date: 2013.11.19 06:17 am · On: Miami Chapter 1
This makes a very nice and detailed outline. It needs more voice and showing rather then telling to be called a story. Sorry if I sound harsh.
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2013.11.18 02:48 am · On: Aberdeen Chapter 7
Interesting outline; would be glad to read the story when it's written.
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