Reviews For Oh Shit!
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.19 02:14 pm · On: Chapter 6
Love the story, but this chapter confused me a bit. Starting after Greta closes her laptop, the story changes to the first person POV - who is that, Visitor Jo or Greta? I also got confused over which Jack you were talking about in places - was it Carter, or Harkness?
Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.17 06:22 pm · On: Chapter 6
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