Imagine: The List
Fic posted by members of Vo's Imaginings YahooGroup
Reviews For Oh Shit!
Reviewer: Neverwill (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.19 02:14 pm · On: Chapter 6

Love the story, but this chapter confused me a bit.  Starting after Greta closes her laptop, the story changes to the first person POV - who is that, Visitor Jo or Greta?  I also got confused over which Jack you were talking about in places - was it Carter, or Harkness?

Author's Response:

Jack Carter is called Carter for this story, Jack Harkness was the one speaking. When there's more than one Jack Harkness or Doctor present, I call them Eureka Jack Harkness, Eureka Doctor, 9th Doctor, 9th Jack, etc.

The first person talking is me, or rather the version of me I created for my Greta stories, I tend to write in 1st person whenever I'm in a story.

Sorry for confusing you.

Reviewer: Jack4Will (Signed) · Date: 2009.07.17 06:22 pm · On: Chapter 6

oooh that is a nice twist. I like it. *grins*

*waits patiently for the next chapter*

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