Reviews For Xander Potter
Reviewer: xman2099 (Signed) · Date: 2010.11.30 09:10 pm · On: Chapter 2
Great story please add more soon I well be watching for it to read.
Reviewer: kyzhart (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.21 03:54 am · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: spurious (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.15 11:19 pm · On: Chapter 2
Very good. The first chapter was fairly standard. This chapter, especially the last paragraphs with the goblin elder was very good. Had punch and sharpness. Good that the goblins are guilty as well not victims.
Reviewer: Shona Katt (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.15 10:44 pm · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Debs (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.15 05:02 am · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: catsim (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 11:40 pm · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: pilvi_z (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 03:19 pm · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: DennSedai (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 04:00 am · On: Chapter 2
*cackles madly in absolute glee* Oh damn....now this is just too good of a scene to leave unreviewed. More please, please, please.....Draco is so cute with how Xander/Harry is cutting him down to size. Plus Snape standing there basically in shock.
Reviewer: erik (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 02:51 am · On: Chapter 2
Reviewer: Wind Wolf (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 01:52 am · On: Chapter 2
It is nice to see this updated, thank you. WW.
Reviewer: kim_cc (Signed) · Date: 2009.11.14 01:41 am · On: Chapter 2
Wow. I love this. I can not wait to see how this will continue to go forth! |
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