I told her to hurry up and get in the car by josette grover

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Danny looks up as Mac drops onto the couch next to him, handing him a mug of coffee.

"Okay, tell me what happened?" He asks when the other man looks up at him.

"We were just finishing up the scene, I told her to hurry up because the sun was beginning to set and I didn't want to be out there after dark. She looked around and remarked that it didn't seem to be the type of neighborhood that had gangs. I told her that was because even the gangs were afraid to be out there after dark."

Mac nods, silently urging Danny to continue.

"I was just locking the cases in the trunk and was opening the door to get in, telling Montana to get in the car so we could get the hell out of there. She asked me what I was so scared of, and I told her to look around, did she see anybody else out after dark around there? She looked around and realized that I wasn't kidding and asked me what was the problem. I told her the truth, vampires."

"How did she react?"

"She laughed, and told me there was no such thing as vampires. Just then, a hand grabbed her and she turned around to yell at them, screaming when the vampire snarled at her in full game face. I was able to stake him, but Montana died of blood loss on the way to the ER." Danny shudders, still in shock but wanting to get his story out before breaking down.

"Did she say anything before she died?" Mac asks.

"Yeah, she just looked at me in disbelief and said 'We don't have those in Montana' before she died." Danny mutters.

The End.

josette grover is the author of 203 other stories.

This story is part of the series, Humorous Deathfics. The previous story in the series is We don't have those in New York (Sorry Montana). The next story in the series is Killed by a Cat.

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I told her to hurry up and get in the car by josette grover [Reviews - 0] Table of Contents - Text Size + Author's Chapter Notes: Disclaimer: If you recognize the characters, they don't belong to me. Danny looks up as Mac drops onto the couch next to him, handing him a mug of coffee. "Okay, tell me what happened?" He asks when the other man looks up at him. "We were just finishing up the scene, I told her to hurry up because the sun was beginning to set and I didn't want to be out there after dark. She looked around and remarked that it didn't seem to be the type of neighborhood that had gangs. I told her that was because even the gangs were afraid to be out there after dark." Mac nods, silently urging Danny to continue. "I was just locking the cases in the trunk and was opening the door to get in, telling Montana to get in the car so we could get the hell out of there. She asked me what I was so scared of, and I told her to look around, did she see anybody else out after dark around there? She looked around and realized that I wasn't kidding and asked me what was the problem. I told her the truth, vampires." "How did she react?" "She laughed, and told me there was no such thing as vampires. Just then, a hand grabbed her and she turned around to yell at them, screaming when the vampire snarled at her in full game face. I was able to stake him, but Montana died of blood loss on the way to the ER." Danny shudders, still in shock but wanting to get his story out before breaking down. "Did she say anything before she died?" Mac asks. "Yeah, she just looked at me in disbelief and said 'We don't have those in Montana' before she died." Danny mutters. The End. josette grover is the author of 203 other stories. This story is part of the series, Humorous Deathfics. The previous story in the series is We don't have those in New York (Sorry Montana). The next story in the series is Killed by a Cat. You must login (register) to review.

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